Könnt ihr mir bitte Tipps geben wie ich meinen Brief weiterschreiben und verbessern könnte?
My name is Anna-Lena Selle and I’m 15 years old. I do not have any information about you yet so I am going to tell you something about me and my life. I come from Germany and live in a very very small village named Naundorf which is so small that there are just under 500 people. My family and I live in 2 flats but they are like one for us. In my family are my mum Julia, my stepfather Stephan, my two bigger stepbrothers Justin and David, my little stepsister Nellie and my brother Luis, who is one year old. I never knew my real dad because my mother brock up with him when she was pregnanted and thought it will be better for us to be without him. I love it to be with animals so we have a white little dog named Jack and he’s really cute and I have a black rabbit named Blacky.I know this name not so creative but I love him. My favorite animals include elephants, dolphins and horses but I have never had a good chance to ride on one of them. In my school is my favorite subject maths and english and my note average is 2.0 which is a B in the USA. My way to school is really long so I take the bus for 30 minutes every morning,that means that I have to wake up really early but it is OK. Now to a worse part and I hope you don’t find it so bad but I have a discreet scoliosis and a slight right hemiparesis as well as an already treated tendon shortening but this restricts me only in sport. This means I don’t really do sport but I like to draw sometimes and I love it to read. Also I like photography which I am never doing before but trying sounds not so bad to me. The reason why I wanna do an exchange year in the USA is to improve my English and meet new people with another culture and another way of life.